~¦♦¦بقلمي~ A poem: Health~¦قصيدة ♦¦~
 

I am very glad when I was reading this nice poem
I remember a idiom say a healthy man is a wealthy man
for anyway thank you so much for this one

nice one Go on!!!

hi, if you permit me i have 3 remarks concernin ur "poem" in terms of rhyming nothing to day . a aa/bb rhyme is respected and is easy to respect.in terms of diction i find nothing poetic about it, i might be so subjective in here, the ******** is farm from being a part of that ******** that we feel and make us feel the soul of the poem and its writer as well,but anyway that was a good atempt i encourage you an d i tell you good luck, thanks for reading this very subjective opinion for poetry is something emotional that is felt by senses more than anything else et bon courage

thanks for your responses
for abu farah
this poem is just a personal effort and i don't pretend to be a professional poet .this is just a humble attemp to pen my emotions

thanks for your great poem