المنتدى: اللغة الانجليزية
24-06-2009, 21:56
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hi, if you permit me i have 3 remarks concernin...
hi, if you permit me i have 3 remarks concernin ur "poem" in terms of rhyming nothing to day . a aa/bb rhyme is respected and is easy to respect.in terms of diction i find nothing poetic about it,...
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المنتدى: الشعر والزجل
17-04-2009, 14:18
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