To tell the truth, your English is not that bad. You've got nice ideas and you are using good expressions. You only have very few mistakes . for example
to become not to became
(became is the simple past of become)
brilliant instead of brillinat
frankly, what you are giving us is instead of What you are giving to us is frankly
Thanks a lot teacher and not Thanks a lot of teacher
Thanks heartly dear Mr. Amzil for your nice reply and kind remarks and may Allah the Almighty reward you the best reward and keep you happy